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Post by ussoberon on Nov 2, 2005 19:09:16 GMT -5
Hi all, This is my first post here, so I thought I'd give you some views of my latest design, the USS Oberon. It's obviously a re-hash of the old Excelsior class with a few mods. I'm sorry for the crappy quality, but I'm travelling at the moment so I've only got MS Paint to use. But if anyone fancies meshing this one, please go right ahead!
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Post by Atolm on Nov 2, 2005 20:06:12 GMT -5
Good Job!! What else you got
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Post by ussoberon on Nov 2, 2005 20:19:25 GMT -5
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Post by Atolm on Nov 3, 2005 8:41:31 GMT -5
the Justice has great flow...you might want to refine that Impulse node on her back some...so it doesn't look so flow breaking to the overall sleek lines
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Post by ussoberon on Nov 4, 2005 7:58:13 GMT -5
Thanks for the comment, Atolm. I always appreciate feedback good or bad. Just to explain why it's there, at the time I drew it, I figured that the Justice class looked a little too organic for a fed ship. I added the impulse 'blister' on purpose to break the flow down its ventral line. Here is a new picture of the USS Oberon kitbash I finished tonight. Again done with MS Paint, which is all I have access to at the moment, so apologies in advance if it looks a bit crappy...
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Post by Atolm on Nov 5, 2005 11:31:00 GMT -5
your pics are showing up as "x" so you may want to look into that... And what's wrong with too organic...
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Post by mayhemuk on Nov 10, 2005 17:36:58 GMT -5
Yeah i cant see them, so i have know idea what this thing looks like.
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Post by Chris Johnson on Nov 10, 2005 17:50:47 GMT -5
I could see the pictures. But incase nobody else can: The Justice-class isn't so bad ( I agree with Atolm, but if you still feel that way about Fed ship designs, make her a mid-25th-century Starship), but although I'm not fond of the late-TNG-era ( 2370s), I like the ideas for the Titan. Not as being the Titan, but a different ship class, like if I were to reimagine the Prometheus-class as looking like that design, or something. For some reason though, I'm now reminded of Hydran Starship design when I think about the latter design, imagining if the Hydrans ( From SFB/SFC lore) joined the Federation in the 24th Century. Nice work on it, your best yet in my opinion. Although I'd modify it a little bit to give it better flow; The Galaxy-class was Starfleet design and it was organic and smooth and beautifully-shaped, and your latter design has as much potential for something like that, as you did with the Justice-class.
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Post by SPApropos on Nov 10, 2005 23:33:22 GMT -5
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Post by CaptainPierce on Nov 11, 2005 18:02:28 GMT -5
The second one bears a certain resemblance to the Wells-class from the 29th Century... (and just for the record, that's not a bad thing )
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Post by modelsplease on Dec 7, 2005 12:05:00 GMT -5
The first sketch looks like a Cleeve designed ship I saw over at Battleclinic
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